Tuesday, January 30, 2018

Kuchoe Ama!, Chapter 1

Located along the Thimphu-Phuntsholing highway, a few kilometers away from Chuzom bridge, Damchu, is a place where there is a stone quarry. Nearby the quarry nests a building and it houses a canteen in the basement, owned by Aum Wangmo. She cleans the gas stove and looks at Dema, who is at the basin, washing dishes. She has completed class ten and result is out today but she has not asked her yet. Having cleaned the gas stove, hanging the cloth, she walks out of the kitchen into counter. It’s midnight. Her back hunched forward, eyes angled straight up at the television, Deki, the youngest daughter, sits on one of the tables. She is going to study in class seven and schooling will start a after week. As of now, both of them are on vacation helping her to run canteen.
On seeing her coming, picking up the remote, she switches off the TV and rushes to her room. Going to the counter, she takes out the credit book and flips the pages totaling the credits. She has heard that her only customer, the workers in the quarry, have got payment today so she expects them to clear the credits from tomorrow. There are some customers who don’t pay the credit, instead quarrel with her by making excuses. Collecting the credits, she has to pay rent, do schooling shopping for both Dema and Deki and buy things for the canteen.
Before running this canteen, she was a housewife but after her husband’s sudden death in a car accident just three months ago has forced her to start this canteen. She has to look after her two children. Her husband was a taxi driver. Now, without him, it will be difficult to stay home and look after them. She started this canteen a month ago.
One night two months after husband’s accident, she was waiting for taxi along the roadside when a Prado stopped suddenly in front of her. Opening the door, the man sitting inside the front seat looked at her.
“Get inside.”
He took her to a restaurant. Having talked for hours, finally the stranger said, “Can you help me with something?”
As she gets lost into her flashback, the sudden knock on the door startles her. Walking towards the door, she pulls it back. Tshenchap, the manager of the stone quarry stands frozen, wearing woolen jacket, looking directly into her eyes. Without saying a word, he walks past her towards the counter. Pulling a stool, he sits keeping his hands on the table. Pushing the door, Aum Wangmo, goes back and stands behind the counter with credit book. Taking out a glass off the rack, she pours two pegs of K5. Filling it up to the brim with water, she slides it in front of him. He keeps staring at her. Ignoring his sight, she keeps checking the credit books name by name, so that she can make a list and give it directly to the finance of the quarry.
Grabbing the glass, he empties it at once and slides it back towards her. Looking at the glass, she lifts her hand up to the rack to get the bottle when he gets off the stool and walks towards her behind the counter. Standing in front of her, he holds her right hand. Looking at her eyes, he says, “I have been waiting. Now, I cannot wait any longer.”
Pulling her forcefully towards his chest, his fingers touching her nose he says, “I am sure, you know what I want. Don’t you?”
She stays silent breathing heavily, as Dema can walk out of that kitchen any minute from now. Turning her face away, she pulls her body away from him but he pulls back grabbing her waist. Staying clutched to his chest, she lowers her head down. Keeping his forehead on hers, he takes out his phone jacket pocket and plays a song. Keeping the phone on the counter table, he makes moves to rhythm of the music. Keeping her eyes at the kitchen door, she stays static. Shaking his body, keeping his head on her shoulder blade, he starts to bite her ears.
As Dema appears from the kitchen, she pushes him away and pretends as if nothing has happened. Walking past them, Dema goes directly towards her room. Pushing the door slowly, she walks inside. Her sister, Deki is sleeping. Standing in front of the mirror, she thinks about how to tell her mother about her result. Grabbing the hair clip, she takes out and keeps it on the table. Changing dress, she climbs on the bed, feeling exhausted. She has been washing dishes for the whole day. On the other hand, Deki served and mother cooked.
Switching off the light, she gets inside the blanket. Turning her face towards Deki, she asks, “Deki, are you asleep?”
No response. Then, she takes out her phone from the drawer. It was a gift from her father on her 16th birthday. This phone reminds her of him. She misses him every day. She has not touched the phone for whole day. As soon as she checks Facebook, the notifications beeps. There   are lots of messages and calls from her classmates. Today is result day. More than one’s result, friends are eager to know other’s result.
Then her phone beeps again. It’s in vibration mode. It’s Chophel. He has called her many times. He is two years senior to her. His class twelve result is not out yet. As a matter of fact, he has been after her since he was class ten but she has not accepted him. She is not sure whether to respond the call or not. He calls her every night but today he will be asking about the result. She does not want to tell her marks. Not to anyone, not even her mother. She ignores the call but it rings again.
Taking a deep breath, she is about to press the answer button when her mother walks in the room switching on the light. Standing a few meters away from her bed, she asks, “How is your result? Qualified?”
Keeping her phone down, Dema stays silent. Her eyes bulging out of the socket, her mother shouts, “How is your result?”
“I didn’t qualify.”
“Good. The manager wants to marry you,” says Aum Wangmo and leaves the room banging the door, waking up Deki.
Story by: Phurpa Dorji (PJIKKS)
Chapter 2 Tomorrow @9PM



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